"Anti-bullying campaigns in high school appear to be having a positive effect -- the problem is taken seriously now, at least. But the problem isn't like polio; it isn't solved, yet. And in any case, many beautiful people don't have the strength of will to resist arrogance and even cruelty...." Darren
"I was wondering when a transformation scenario like this would go and Tina doesn't disappoint. A classic case of the lead Patrice witnessing the rise and fall of Becky with a well, thought-out transformation sequence and some perspective on how cruel people can be at times; case in point Becky..." Phillip Marzette
"I love those "naughtier" subjects, and when I heard of Tina Tirrell's's debut on the virtual shelves of erotica, I had to take a peek. I write so much that I usually forget to read what's hot, but one area that I haven't played around in much myself is in that "just of age" genre. And don't..." Cheri Lille
"Holy crap, this is HOT! I've never read anything like it before. This story begs to continue as a series. Please, please, write more!" Joseph R.
"I've bought/read all of your short stories, and in my opinion, this is the best one because it's the most realistic and just WOW. Absolutely grasps your imagination. Unbelievable. Thank you and please keep writing you have some pretty devout fans waiting for your next piece of art." theguy17